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Graphics - Some of the graphics were a little weird such as the gun itself but overal they were actually fairly good, the animation made up for what was lacking in the graphics. I thought the people dying actually looked quite good.
Gameplay - The gameplay was okay but nothing too special. The fast paced-ness of the 2nd level and up was what kept me playing but there was one really annoying thing. It would make more sense if it to fire on press rather than on release. After all, if i pull a trigger it fires. I don't pull a trigger and then let go to fire. This really got on my nerves.
Overal 6/10
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the suggestion. I really don't know why I didn't have it fire upon press in the first place. I've changed the game now so that it does.
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Graphics
The graphics were alright. I quite liked the background colours etc. But the graphics of the squares coming in seemed pretty poor and the green around the line you drew again looked pretty poor.
Gameplay
I quite liked the idea behind the game. Yet it wasn't executed so well. Sometimes you would draw a loop with your "wire" yet the game didn't sense that so you had to draw it again.
On another note, the game simply wasn't fast enough. I feel asleep after the second level and gave up as it took ages just for the sqaures to get away from the edge so i could draw them again.
I would like to see you make another version of this, a little faster and with some cool new features and the testing of the circle improved. I think a cool feature you could add is a limited "length" for the "wire", so you can't just circle the whole lot.
Graphics 5/10
Gameplay 6/10
Sound 5/10
Overal 6/10
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I've already got it sponsored, so its not going to change, but I'll think about some of these things in my next game.
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How this passed, i'll never know. The 'graphics', if you can even call them that, were awful. Looked like you did it in about 1min. If you can't write neatly then at least use the text tool.
MORE EFFORT.
Author's Response:
yeah i did it in ten
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You've managed to download a pack of madness sprites - delete most of them - and add a drag and drop script. Whats so amazing about that?
Do something original. We don't want to look at 100s of madness submissions where we can 'build our own scene' or just look at sprites. How fun - not.
Come up with something original.
Author's Response:
Your mother.
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That made me lol so hard XD
That was amazing.
5.
Where can I get the audio?
Author's Response:
It is in the audio section on www.albinoblacksheep.com
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Totally boring. Been done before but alot better.
About your disclaimer - if you put songs on there that are 'rude' etc. It IS your responsibility and it does affect the rating. Why wouldn't it?
Thats like me putting together a flash and rating it 'E' despite being all gory and saying "Oh - my friend drew that so its still 'E'"
Sort it out.
Author's Response:
no - i externally linked those songs. they aren't even technically in the flash at all!
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This is absolutly awful. If you are going to teach people how to do something like this at least use the text tool the whole time, unless you can write good with PB, and also draw something half decent. If you can't - at least use a circle. This is terrible.
Author's Response:
Yeah yeah yeah so now another person is gonna preach to me about not using text! Its the way i animate idiot if you don't like it kill yourself.
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I was stunned by this it was absolutly amazing. This will probally get daily feature or maybe even front page. You have to do damn good to make a submission as good as this.
I liked your style. It added great effect to what is a wonderful song. :D
Author's Response:
Thanks dude for the compliments! It's always nice to know that someone liked the movie. And since I can't respond to every response, I'll say thanks to everyone for the reviews!
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"NG is not a showcase for your art."
Submit when you have actually animated it or make something special. We do not just want to look at pictures you've made. To get something to be on NG you have to work hard at it and make it different and special. I know my flashs' arnt anything special but i was a newb when i made them and i am currently working on a better game wheich i am aiming to get at least a 3 with.
Author's Response:
Well the whole point of this is wether i should make a game or movie, or work on anything else.
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Graphics: 4 because the animation was crap and the drawings could have been done by a 2year old.
Sound was okay i suppose.
Violence.. wtf they just "walked" into each other!
Seriously not funny :|
Author's Response:
koibito = vozzu-kun
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