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[Wires]

Some improvements could be made...

Graphics

The graphics were alright. I quite liked the background colours etc. But the graphics of the squares coming in seemed pretty poor and the green around the line you drew again looked pretty poor.

Gameplay

I quite liked the idea behind the game. Yet it wasn't executed so well. Sometimes you would draw a loop with your "wire" yet the game didn't sense that so you had to draw it again.

On another note, the game simply wasn't fast enough. I feel asleep after the second level and gave up as it took ages just for the sqaures to get away from the edge so i could draw them again.

I would like to see you make another version of this, a little faster and with some cool new features and the testing of the circle improved. I think a cool feature you could add is a limited "length" for the "wire", so you can't just circle the whole lot.

Graphics 5/10
Gameplay 6/10
Sound 5/10
Overal 6/10

prograhamming responds:

Thanks for the review. I've already got it sponsored, so its not going to change, but I'll think about some of these things in my next game.

[Rolling turtle]

Good job

First impression was good, nicely set out menu. Good music. Good graphics. Only criticism was it was slightly hard to distinguish between unlocked and locked levels on the level select menu (the locked ones could be more faded out).

The gameplay itself was also very good. Good idea for a game and certainly fun, reminds me of one of my many unfinished engines. The main thing was that the controls (arrow keys) were quite hard and didn't really have a massive effect on the turtle when on a hill, even if its only a slight incline.

Gameplay 7/10
Graphics 7/10
Sound 9/10
Overal 7/10

[Strange1st quiz]

Terrible

How this passed, i'll never know. The 'graphics', if you can even call them that, were awful. Looked like you did it in about 1min. If you can't write neatly then at least use the text tool.

MORE EFFORT.

Trilliams responds:

yeah i did it in ten

[Honeymoon Secrets]

Unoriginal

The graphics are clearly very good and you certainly could go a long way making games but originality lets you down. This game has been done so many times before and this doesn't bring anything new to the game. Just same old, same old.

I would like to see you make some more games but with an originally idea. I'm sure they would turn out very well if you put more thought into the idea.

Also just a minor bug, occasionally for some reason to symbols overlapped for a bit until one popped into its correct square.

[Crazy Nodes]

Good puzzle game

All round good game. Pretty unique and definitely a challenge. One of the best puzzle games I've played in ages. Got me totally hooked even though I didn't get too far.

The first problem though is after a while it gets repetitive. Its all pretty much the same. Try and think of some new ideas and ways to make levels different. Will make it so that people can play for longer.

Secondly, sometimes its hard to see what you're moving when there are lots of nodes even though the ball things change to red. Prehaps make the lines themselves change colour if you're in control of them?

Overal, good game - 7/10

Good luck.

[-Will this pass-]

Average...

It was okay but not particularly amazing. The idea has been done before though. Perhaps make a second version where you're a ball and there are different shapes flying in etc. So you're not just getting pushed along the x axis.

Its also way to easy which causes it to get boring very quickly.

[Tetris Attack]

Don't like it..

Poor graphics, poor idea. Its nothing special. Just another one of those, "I learnt to make buttons! Lets make shooting stuffs game!!!1111!!"

Try making a 'mute' button as the music annoyed me as I wanted to listen to my own.

Make your own graphics as opposed to using photos.

Keep trying.

[Moar Madness Scene Creator 2]

Well done..

You've managed to download a pack of madness sprites - delete most of them - and add a drag and drop script. Whats so amazing about that?

Do something original. We don't want to look at 100s of madness submissions where we can 'build our own scene' or just look at sprites. How fun - not.

Come up with something original.

F1Krazy responds:

Your mother.

[HomePage Test]

Awful...

Everything about it was terrible. Also tests don't belong here on NG. This is for finished works.

[Merry Christmas Greeting!]

Boring

Totally boring. Been done before but alot better.

About your disclaimer - if you put songs on there that are 'rude' etc. It IS your responsibility and it does affect the rating. Why wouldn't it?

Thats like me putting together a flash and rating it 'E' despite being all gory and saying "Oh - my friend drew that so its still 'E'"

Sort it out.

ZiggyZack99 responds:

no - i externally linked those songs. they aren't even technically in the flash at all!