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[I wanna be the flash game]

THIS GAME WAS AWFUL, I DIED WHEN IT DIDN'T EVEN TOUCH ME >:(

Lochie responds:

git gud

[Wires]

Some improvements could be made...

Graphics

The graphics were alright. I quite liked the background colours etc. But the graphics of the squares coming in seemed pretty poor and the green around the line you drew again looked pretty poor.

Gameplay

I quite liked the idea behind the game. Yet it wasn't executed so well. Sometimes you would draw a loop with your "wire" yet the game didn't sense that so you had to draw it again.

On another note, the game simply wasn't fast enough. I feel asleep after the second level and gave up as it took ages just for the sqaures to get away from the edge so i could draw them again.

I would like to see you make another version of this, a little faster and with some cool new features and the testing of the circle improved. I think a cool feature you could add is a limited "length" for the "wire", so you can't just circle the whole lot.

Graphics 5/10
Gameplay 6/10
Sound 5/10
Overal 6/10

prograhamming responds:

Thanks for the review. I've already got it sponsored, so its not going to change, but I'll think about some of these things in my next game.

[Strange1st quiz]

Terrible

How this passed, i'll never know. The 'graphics', if you can even call them that, were awful. Looked like you did it in about 1min. If you can't write neatly then at least use the text tool.

MORE EFFORT.

Trilliams responds:

yeah i did it in ten

[Moar Madness Scene Creator 2]

Well done..

You've managed to download a pack of madness sprites - delete most of them - and add a drag and drop script. Whats so amazing about that?

Do something original. We don't want to look at 100s of madness submissions where we can 'build our own scene' or just look at sprites. How fun - not.

Come up with something original.

F1Krazy responds:

Your mother.

[Tweening Tut.]

Terrible.

This is absolutly awful. If you are going to teach people how to do something like this at least use the text tool the whole time, unless you can write good with PB, and also draw something half decent. If you can't - at least use a circle. This is terrible.

DP responds:

Yeah yeah yeah so now another person is gonna preach to me about not using text! Its the way i animate idiot if you don't like it kill yourself.